初中英語培訓：作文範文賞析

英語作文幾乎是所有英語考試中都會出現的，它是考生英語綜合實力的體現。想要得高分確實不易，很多學生都對英語作文頭疼不已。那麼在初中的英語學習過程中，我們應該怎麼辦呢?除了老師教給大家的知識，大家還可以背誦一些優秀的範文來增加語感!比如下面這些!

1. 沉迷網絡遊戲

李華沉迷於電腦遊戲中，影響了學習。作爲他的好朋友，你打算怎麼幫他呢?請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少於80字的短文。字跡工整，語言流暢。

提示詞：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

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Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it's very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.

If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

2. 如何減壓讓生活更美好

許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產生壓力,爲了更好地發現及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"爲主題的英語演講比賽,請你準備發言稿,談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法,與同學分享,內容包括:

(1) 同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什麼;

(2) 我的壓力是什麼;

(3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意:文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名。詞數80~100。

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Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I'm always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That's all. Thank you!

3.怎樣保持健康的生活習慣

健康的生活習慣對於成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認爲健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的呢?請根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。

信息提示：健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜;參加運動,強身健體。

要求:根據信息提示,把握要點,適當發揮,不逐字翻譯。字數在80詞左右。

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I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

4. 畢業感想

初中生活馬上就要結束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經過和事後你的感想(請不要寫出真實的學校名稱以及真實姓名)。

提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

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How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her.

I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

5. 低碳生活

現在全世界都在倡導“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，採取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

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Low-carbon life is good for everyone.

To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we'd better not spend much money on expensive clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.

6. 節約用水

水是生命之源。隨着水資源的短缺，節約用水是我們每個人的責任，請以此爲話題寫一篇不少於80字的短文。

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As we know, water is very important to man, we can't live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don't care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it's a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It's also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don't save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.

I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

7. 興趣

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My best subject

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.

But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.

I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

8. 我最好的朋友

My best friend

My best friend is Jack.

He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.

His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.

He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.

9. 傳統節日介紹

根據中文大意和英語提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少於80詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意：不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名。

假設你是劉偉，你的美國朋友MIKE 想通過你瞭解中國的傳統節日。請你根據提示，給Mike 寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國傳統節日春節的情況。

內容提示：1.春節是中國最重要的傳統節日;2.春節期間人們的主要活動(節前、除夕、節日期間)< Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money>

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Dear Mike,

How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.

Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Liu Wei

10. 開展有意的活動

爲配合我市開展“創建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動，學校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”爲主題的英語徵文比賽。現在請你根據所給提示內容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。

提示：1. 衣着整潔;2. 保持環境衛生;3. 待人有禮，樂於助人;4. 遵守交通規則;5. ……

要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1—4 項內容，可展開思路，適當發揮;

2. 文中不能出現考生的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息;

3. 詞數：80詞左右。

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

背誦範文，是提升英語寫作水平的一個重要的方法。記住它們並不意味着考試的時候就一定照搬照抄，而是在平時英語學習過程中瞭解語言組織結構，運用高檔詞彙，更能鍛鍊自己長難句的掌握程度。滬江小編建議大家英語範文可以嚐嚐背誦!